How to write stories for Thematic Appreciation Test?

These are the TAT examples.  These are my own stories, just take it as the reference friends.

"A GROUP OF PERSONS WORKING WITH MACHINES"

     Raj was the newly graduated engineer.  By his hardwork he got job in a company.  He was good in his work by finishing the tasks before the end date.  One day a big task was assigned to his team and the time limit to finish that task was minimum.  So he motivated his team members to do well and to finish the task in time.  At that time one of his team mates got ill and was in leave.  So raj took in charge and managed to finish both of their works.  With his efforts the team finished the work in time and retained their good name.

"A STUDENT REPORTING TO HIS OFFICER/TEACHER"

     Kumar was the final year engineering graduate.  Along with his studies, he was interested in extracurriculars.  Be cause of this he was the placement coordinator for his department.  Since it was the last semester, principal asked to kumar about placement of  college and students preparation.  Kumar promised principal that this year our college will get more placement offers. Like wise, he motivated his friends to apply for various government jobs and also talked to HR persons of various companies to conduct campus interview at their college campus.  With his effort more students got benefited with placement offers.  Kumar set an example as a placement coordinator for his juniors.

"A GROUP OF STUDENTS SEEING NOTICE BOARD"

     Rajesh was studious from his child hood.  He wanted to study his degree in the city college.  So for that he studied well at 12th standard and got seat in city college as per his wish.  Rajesh continued his good study in college also.  Since all of the members in the college came with good marks, all gave tough competition to Rajesh.  Though he was in the top few but not in the first. The final year came and he wanted to come first in the department.  So he put more time in study and self analysed himself and found the reason for his shortage of marks.  At last he rectified the mistakes and wrote the exam well to come first at the end of semester.  

"A PERSON OFFERING FOOD TO THE PEOPLE"

     Ramesh was the eleventh standard student.  While returning to his home from school, he heard shouting of people.  After recognizing the situation  he came to know that his town was affected by tsunami.  So he wanted to help their town people.  He collected his group of friends to rescue the affected people. After arranging shelter to the rescued people with the help of  NGO's, he wanted to give them food. So he told to his friends to prepare some food in each of their home and distribute it up to the extent.  By this timely work many people got benefited.

"A GROUP OF PERSONS WORKING IN ROAD"

 
     Vignesh was a software engineer.  He went to his grandmothers village to enjoy his summer vacation.  There he found the road condition was not good and it is a mud road wit so many pit falls.  Also he saw villagers and farmers struggling with their loads in those road.  So he collected his group of child hood friends to find a solution for this.  They collected gravel and filled the gap at the mud road.  This was some what okay for the village people.  But vignesh wanted to find a permanent solution for this issue.  He went to his Village Administrative Officer and made a written request for the cement road.  With his efforts the permission was granted and cement road was laid before the summer.  Village people thanked vignesh.   He returned to his work after the vacation with satisfaction.